Fightin' Attire Comparison

Before I left for Europe I got a really cool critique from Bryan Lee that can be found here: funkymonkey1945.deviantart.com…

I decided that when I got back I would actually try to implement those things by more than just taking note of it and moving on. I decided to sketch something up with those critiques in mind. Now I gather there are probably still some things wrong with it and if I were to take the revamped one up to a complete finish I would alter things like the perspective on the background and make tweaks here and there, but I think I like the overall feel better on the new one. I still have to work more on full figures and harmonizing the weight and perspective and I think this is a good start.

The style ended up being a bit different because I was paying close attention to his notes but I don't think it's too far removed from my usual stuff. It's nice to get in-depth critiques again, I seldom get them these days now that I'm not regularly posting on art forums like I used to. I usually have to seek out critiques these days from people I know so this was a pleasant surprise.

I thought I would toss up a comparison to show the differences between the two in such a short time.